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Poetry in Pictures

Poetry in Pictures

For the last three years Disability Arts Cymru have held competitions for disabled artists and disabled poets. There was no theme in the first year but in 2016 the theme was austerity / extravagance, and in 2017 it was Stronger Together. I love these competitions, I love the eyebrow-raising effect of a blind person responding to a piece of visual artwork ;)

2015

Although my own health didn't allow me to enter the competition in 2015 I did respond to two pieces. Blue Ballet Slippers, by mouth painting artist Rosie Moriarty Simmonds inspired my poem Tomorrow’s Dancers, which I included in my pamphlet, Dressing Up, and in an article for Poetry Wales issue 52.1, on Poetry and Disability. Study in Red by Lucy Chaplin inspired my poem of the same name and you can read my poem of Study in Red in the magazine Corncrake; that poem is one of very few where I actually use my diabetic complications, blindness and kidney failure, in a poem.

image of a painting titled Study in Red by Lucy Chaplin. It is an abstract painting featuring different shades of red, textures and shapes.
image of the painting Blue Ballet Slippers by mouth painting artist Rosie Moriarty Simmonds. The picture shows a pair of blue ballet pumps en pointe.

I enjoyed writing poetry about visual images so much that I bought framed prints of both of those paintings.

2016 — Austerity / Extravagance

In 2016 the theme was austerity and extravagance. The two pieces I chose to respond to were Dressing Up, Dressing Down by Gemma Paine and A Tree in Two Movements by Rose Foran. My pamphlet had a poem called Dressing Up and another called Dressing Down already in the early drafts, so it seemed a perfect fit. I responded with a poem titled Glad Rags and it too is contained in the pamphlet.

The painting A Tree in Two Movements touched me with its title. I love classical music and Franz Schubert’s symphony no.8 in B minor is known as The Unfinished because it only has two movements where a symphony in those days more normally had four. I turned the tree into a Christmas tree and the two movements as two very different settings. My poem adds the word unfinished to Rose’s title and uses the tempo markings from the Schubert symphony as stanza headings. When the results were announced this poem was highly commended.

The Unfinished Story of a Tree in Two Movements

(after A Tree in Two Movements, painting by Rose Foran)

i. allegro moderato

a tree
dressed to take on the world
festooned with sparkle
tinsel and lametta fronds
fingering towards the floor
lights in randomised oscillation
plinking we wish you a merry

ii. andante con moto

on the edge of bleak Street
a man
a lady
a baby boy in swaddling
cuddle under the bare bough
of last year's glitz
salvaged from a skip;
he shapes a stick
into a loose form snowflake
a stand-in angel
for the top

2017 — Closer Together

In 2017 I once again found the musical connection chiming a chord and it was again the artwork of Rosie Moriarty Simmonds that did the trick. A sighted friend described her painting as being like the chalk outline of a human figure which, to me, conjured an image of a person whose presence I was aware of but couldn't quite touch.

I submitted a poem titled Song to the Vinyl Siren, a partial homage to the Chemical Brothers track Song to the Siren and my former love, vinyl records. The Chemical Brothers track feels like a digital city in which a party is happening on every street corner, but at the same time feels fragile and on edge. ‘The fragile sounds of our digital city’ is one line in my poem that riffs on that image. I can't share the whole poem with you here because my poem was one of three Highly Commendeds and will be published in the competition anthology and you'll be able to purchase that from the Disability arts Cymru website in due course :)

Another Highly Commended poet this year is Rhian Elizabeth, one of my Facebook friends. Rhian runs Word Ward

Word Ward is a creative writing group in Cardiff for anyone with a long term health condition. A relaxed space where people can meet and share their passion for creative writing. We meet every other Wednesday evening in a fully accessible room in the Wales Millennium Centre.
(Rhian Elizabeth)

Rosie Moriarty Simmonds, The mouth painting artist who has inspired two of my poems, is also in the news this week for being one of the 100 women: A celebration of Wales' brilliant women for the enormous amount of charity work she does and her work raising awareness on disability matters.

Words and Pictures

That's enough words from me for this post, so I'll leave you with this link to the gallery of artwork in the 2017 Disability Arts Cymru competition :)

#poetry #paintings #ekphrastic #DisabilityArtsCymru

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2 Comments

  1. I do like the Unfinished Story of a Tree in Two Movements!

    I think the stand in angel should have a hyphen though. I got stuck there, and it strikes me that’s something you might not be so aware of, because of not seeing it. A stand-in angel reads right because of the hyphen creating the compound adjective ‘stand-in’.

    A stand in angel (without the hyphen and three separate words) makes me think it might be a stand (like a hat stand) or an error because you meant ‘standing angel’.

    I also love the eyebrow-raising effect of a blind person responding to a piece of visual artwork. Delicious.

  2. Giles Giles

    thanks Nell, that errant hyphen will be duly added 🙂 xx

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